I’m still muddling through Chapter 17. With how long this one is taking me, I’m a little worried I won’t meet my editing goal. I’m aiming to finish the second draft by July 31st. Nine days with six chapters to finish…
With this current chapter, I’m aiming to prevent the tension from the earlier battle to be released completely. I want people to know the story isn’t ending yet. Some of the best is yet to come.
I’m also trying not to start every sentence with She or The. I’m feeling like I got lazy with my writing somewhere. I’ll have to scour through the whole book to fix that. I think I can send it out to beta readers regardless though. I’m wanting them to look at the bigger things beyond word choice. I can fix wording in the third revision.
It’s passed my bedtime.